The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

transport

industry is a multi-billion industry

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is fundamental in supporting

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goverment

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in revenue collection.In

year

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1888 the

first

automobile was visualized

however

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,by the year 2000 there was a probability they were as several as 29 million motor

vehicle

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vehicles

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.The

transport

sector has been

hotly

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- debated that alternative methods of

transport

should be emulated and global laws brought up to control car ownership and

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apply

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utilization.

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Over all

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believe it is a step forward.

Firstly

,we need to reduce dependant on cars

such

that we adapt the use of a metro

system

and train.

In addition

,well-designed public

transport

can be comfortable and

convinient

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convenient

.

Consequently

,reduce pollution in cities and ease traffic congestion.

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London

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there

is

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congestion charges which help raise funds for better public

transport

.

Thus

,other methods of transit will facilitate a good environment once the structures are put in place and the society

get

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into the

system

.

Secondly

,global rules will help

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society in adhering to the new movement

system

.

Nevertheless

,punishments should become

more

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stricter

such

that nobody would wish to break them.

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,

this

wil

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will

make the new

system

valuable in a way to make the society just look for

such

mode of

transport

.

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the president signed a constitution in law on free private car day.

Thus

,the world laws will facilitate road safety

such

as no use of mobile phones while driving,speed cameras and speed pumps To sum up,the tremendous growth of cars have

costed

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the environment at large but with the

adapted

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of

other mode

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another mode

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of

transport

and regulations will be a great boost toward

improvement

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the improvement

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of

travel

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the travel

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industry