The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The shipment industry is a multi-billion industry

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fundamental in supporting the

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in revenue collection.In the year 1888 the

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automobile was visualized

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,by the year 2000 there was a probability they were as several as 29 million motor vehicles.The transportation sector has been

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- debated that alternative methods of shipping should be emulated and global laws brought up to control car ownership and

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utilization.Overall,

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believe it is a step forward.

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,we need to reduce dependant on cars

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that we adapt the use of a metro system and train.

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,well-designed public

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can be comfortable and convenient.

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,reduce pollution in cities and ease traffic congestion.

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,in

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there are congestion charges which help raise funds for better public

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,other methods of transit will facilitate a good environment once the structures are put in place and the society gets into the rule.

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,global rules will help

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society in adhering to the new movement system.

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,punishments should become

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stricter

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that nobody would wish to break them.

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will make the new scheme valuable in a way to make the society just look for

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mode of

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the president signed a constitution in law on free private car day.

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,the world laws will facilitate road safety

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as no use of mobile phones while driving,speed cameras and speed pumps To sum up,the tremendous growth of cars have cost the environment at large but

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the adaption of other modes of

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and regulations will be a great boost toward the improvement of the travel industry