Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One

of the biggest concerns of

human

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in the 21st century is environmental

problems

. It is thought by some people that the disappearance of

some

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certain plants and animal

species

should be put into serious consideration. Meanwhile, others hold the consumption that it is of

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need to look into broader and more important global environmental

problems

. In

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essay, I will examine both of these views and try to draw some conclusions. On the

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hand, there is an environmental problem that put many scientists and environmentalists under a lot of pressure. It is the extinction of certain botanical

species

and animals. The ecosystem is unlikely to remain

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balance if any

species

is wiped out. The loss of

one

species

may lead to the others on the verge of extinction because they have an interrelationship with

one

another.

For instance

, the decrease in the number of wasp population may lead to the reduction of many flowers’ opportunities to be pollinated that probably

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in the shrinking in the number of some kinds of plant that wasps tend to frequent.

On the other hand

,

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gigantic environmental problem that should be thought of and put into priority is global warming. Severe weather conditions unprecedentedly happen

such

as torrential rains, freezing climate or scorching hot weather. These weather conditions might be to blame for the discriminated manufacturing activities of

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that lead to global warming.

Besides

, natural disasters namely

flood

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floods

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, tsunami,

typhoon

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typhoons

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and

volcanic

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eruption

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eruptions

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have tremendously affected the lives of billions of people in the world with more and more devastating levels.

Moreover

, the increase

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sea level is the most worth-concerned issue, especially when the icecap in both poles of the earth is melting gradually.

Hence

,

this

constitutes an imminent threat to the survival of human

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. All things considered, every

environmental related

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issue should be carefully examined and people ought to take urgent actions to address these

problems

, whether they are large-scaled or small-scaled

problems

because

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my point of view, the tiniest issues which are not addressed properly can possibly cause more dire

problems

to happen and threaten the survival of any creature on Earth.