Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The rapid disappearance of certain plants and

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has caused some people to believe

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is a huge environmental loss to the modern world.

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, it is

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argued that humanity still faces even bigger challenges, citing

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as an obvious example.

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essay will investigate how the two groups defend their claims and

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the writer’s view on the debate. On the one side of the argument, a number of people believe that the extinction of some kinds of fauna and flora may cause permanent damage to the current vulnerable ecosystem, potentially leading to

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loss of many other

species

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. Picturing the world as a place where lots of

animals

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are struggling to sustain their lives with increasingly rare

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of food which mainly include

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other

animals

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and vegetables and plants are dying as

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the soil

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becomes much less fertile due to the reduction of probiotics,

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group of people draws a connection between the recent losses and the future of a broken ecosystem in which one death of

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specie may lead to another, or even a number, of the others. On the other side of the argument,

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appears to attract a great deal of concern for the fear that not only the wild but

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mankind will suffer the catastrophic aftermaths of

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environmental problem. While agreeing that the world will witness many

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rushing towards their extinction, supporters of

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view take a closer look at how crucial factors that are vital for human life

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as clean air and living environment and

fresh water

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are deteriorating at

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an alarming

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level

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. They believe if bold action combating

climate

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is not about to be taken, it would not take much time for human civilization to follow the path of extinction. In my opinion, there is a strong association between

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and the loss

plants

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and

animals

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in which the former serves as the root cause of the latter. As

climate

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directly affects the essential elements that maintain life for

human

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, fauna and flora, it would barely make sense to try to save certain kinds of

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at the extremely high risk of leaving the true life-threatening factor

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and

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. For an easy example, no matter how many animal or plant reserves and sanctuaries governments are going to build,

population

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the population

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of

species

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will keep declining if the global living conditions drop even faster. It could be concluded that only by dealing with

climate

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can we protect the life of other creatures as well as ours.