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Some People think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #friends
Friends
 play a vital role in an individual's life. A Couple of
people
 says that always spend time with
people
 who have exactly the same mentality as yours, while some
people
 opine and encourage them to be
friends
 with
people
 who have a different point of view.
This
 essay will discuss both sides.
Although
, in my ,opinion there are many benefits if you have someone with the same opinions. Having companion with similar ideas are always stay together. Their similarities make them more creative.
For example
, two
friends
 with similarities among them have a strong understanding and their friendship
last
 longer. They always share new ideas and implement the same together which makes them happier and continue healthy
relationship
 due to fewer arguments. 
On the other hand
,
friends
 having different opinions does not seem to continue their
relationship
 for a long time. Somewhere in life they always end up having arguments. To elaborate more, a survey was conducted in the school in London among children. Where the students were clearly stated that they can not stay
friends
 together with a dissimilar mentality or nature as it affects their
relationship
 in the long run as well as affect their mental well-being. To conclude, in my ,opinion
friends
 who consist of the same ideas are happier and continue their
relationship
 with a full heart. Whereas ,
people
 with differences never accept each other flaws and fail to keep their relations. In my suggestion ,
people
 should choose their
friends
 smartly and find someone who understands and accept them as it is.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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