Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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recycling enormously than ever before.
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, some think that home reusing is not adequate and they believe that
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the law can be needed. It is possible to increase
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legal
action
? No, it is not possible because there are other measures
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be increased which
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behaviour
modification
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modification
can be increased
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recycling.
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reproducing
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through
education
. People would like to do the reusing process how the
education
system can teach since childhood period for crucial of
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thus
, folks would like to
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wastage from the
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.
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can only teach
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rather than anything.
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creating awareness about
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recycling in
education based
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,
thus
, 20% of reuse increased in
last
year.
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, recycling can be
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more by
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modification
.
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be imposing legal
action
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such
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,
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India has imposed a new law for folks who are throw garbage in
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place
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while they punish strictly,
thus
, now India is a clean territory than any other
asian
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nations
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.
Hence
, imposing a
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action
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. imposing a legal
action
might be increased recycling, educational awareness can be grown
reusing
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tremendously because folks like to do
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their's willingness. I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.
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