Environmental problems such as pollutation and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutations are not effective. why are the solutations ineffective? How can these problems be solved?

Over the

last

few ,decades environmental causes have been the main core of concern to the

world

leaders

.even though they took many steps to reduce

this

problem,still not realized into action.

However

,

pollution

and

climate

change

is

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the most dangerous which effected many

countries

.to illustrate that to control

pollution

must make less carbon emission and decentralization of big industries.

In addition

,For

climate

change

need concrete initiative by the

world

leaders

and provide more financial support to

climate

effected

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states. In

this

essay

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i

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will examine the causes of environmental problems and illustrates possible solutions. To commence with,

although

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previous global decision has not come into action,it is high time to take timely actions to protect mankind.In many big ,cities

pollution

is a matter of concern.

However

, need to take fruitful measures to control these.

firstly

, banning old vehicles and introducing

environmentally friendly

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vehicles which reduce carbon emissions.

secondly

,disallowing heavy industries in the city area which is helping to make control

pollution

in the city.

Therefore

, to protect our city must take initiative to limit

pollution

.

Furthermore

, To prevent the effects of

climate

change

must take measures by rich

countries

because they are responsible

of

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increasing global warming by making greenhouse.

Moreover

, due to swelling the

world

,temperature

third

-

world

countries

are affected more.

For instance

. Bangladesh is the most vulnerable country

of

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climate

change

every year thousand of people dies and millions of families get homeless by effecting of heavy storms.For

this

reason,

the

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world

leaders

need a concrete master plan to protect

climate

affected

countries

by providing financial support. To conclude,I

thus

believe only solid master plans by the

world

leaders

can save our environment and protects our mankind.so the

world

leaders

must concentrate to implement action that has

taken

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by them