Environmental problems such as pollutation and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutations are not effective. why are the solutations ineffective? How can these problems be solved?

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few ,decades environmental causes have been the main core of concern to the

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leaders

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.even though they took many steps to reduce

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problem,still not realized into action.

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,

pollution

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and

climate

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change

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the most dangerous which effected many

countries

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.to illustrate that to control

pollution

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must make less carbon emission and decentralization of big industries.

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climate

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change

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need concrete initiative by the

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leaders

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and provide more financial support to

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effected

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states. In

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will examine the causes of environmental problems and illustrates possible solutions. To commence with,

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previous global decision has not come into action,it is high time to take timely actions to protect mankind.In many big ,cities

pollution

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is a matter of concern.

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, need to take fruitful measures to control these.

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, banning old vehicles and introducing

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vehicles which reduce carbon emissions.

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,disallowing heavy industries in the city area which is helping to make control

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in the city.

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, to protect our city must take initiative to limit

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.

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, To prevent the effects of

climate

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change

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must take measures by rich

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because they are responsible

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increasing global warming by making greenhouse.

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,temperature

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countries

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are affected more.

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. Bangladesh is the most vulnerable country

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climate

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change

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every year thousand of people dies and millions of families get homeless by effecting of heavy storms.For

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reason,

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world

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leaders

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need a concrete master plan to protect

climate

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affected

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by providing financial support. To conclude,I

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believe only solid master plans by the

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leaders

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can save our environment and protects our mankind.so the

world

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leaders

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must concentrate to implement action that has

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by them