Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In general, especially in an ever-growing of different nation’s relationships at present, the spirit of mutual support is encouraged by United Nations and it

also

become one of the most vital regulations.

As a result

, the majority of developed

countries

frequently suggest lots of generous offers

to

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assist the financial problems of

countries

that are in urgent support. In my opinion, there are considerable diversities in the type of assistance,

however

,

money

is the most essential and fundamental method that can be provided. There are several arguments in

favor

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of monetary aid

that is

necessary and immediately

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the financial issues.

Therefore

, to emphasize the importance of

money

, a large number of nations, namely, The Western

Countries

and the Americas incorporate to spend the minority of their budgets for some international relief trips.

For instance

, during the COVID pandemic and compulsory lockdowns, most of the funds

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mainly are

money

and vaccines from developed

countries

. Individual parts were used for various purposes

such

as food providing, “frontline health workers” incentivizing and utility bills.

However

, the opposite statement

also

has its own purpose. In fact, a large amount of

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which are provided by some wealthy

countries

ends up in pockets of rapacious and irresponsible politicians. Despite

of

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the citizen’s

endeavor

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to overcome the current pandemic, some government’s staffs are corrupt and embezzle for personal benefits

instead

of helping people.

For example

, in my country, during the COVID pandemic, people from

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or undeveloped provinces have not received any

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assistance

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assistances

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from the government and

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of the

money

had been vanished into thin air.

Nevertheless

, these mentioned problems are being

under

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controlled

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. In conclusion, even though there are some limitations of financial support with

money

but I am still convinced that it is the most useful and possible way to operate in high priority situations.