in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

Nowadays, the number of
people
who like to know about the
history
of their house or
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
is increasing.In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain the reasons and recommend some ways for those who want to know more about their building. searching for the
history
of our house has several reasons.
Firstly
, humans are able to know more about their building and living area. I believe each person should know about the past of his apartment to ensure
that is
he living in a good structure and area or not.
Secondly
, in my
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
show examples
there is an unwanted
willing
Replace the word
willingness
show examples
in every person to know about the past and how things changed.
For example
,
people
like to visit historical houses and surf the web for
it's
Replace the word
its
show examples
history
. There are various ways for
people
who want to search about the
history
of their house. The
first
and the
formest
Correct your spelling
foremost
show examples
is to ask neighbours or salespersons who are living or working there for a long time because they witnessed all the things
happened
Correct pronoun usage
that happened
show examples
there. They have really useful information but we should ensure that they are trustworthy enough.
In addition
, there are
also
other ways like exploring websites or searching in a library in our living area about some pictures or
datas
Correct your spelling
data
. We should
also
consider that there
aren't
Change the verb form
isn't
show examples
enough data for every single
apartments
Change to a singular noun
apartment
show examples
and their
history
. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe there is an increase in the number of
people
who like to know about the
history
of their apartment and the steps mentioned should be taken to research
about
Change preposition
apply
show examples
it.
Submitted by arashg911 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: