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The following bar charts display data on the
tickets
pricing on flights from Sydney to Melbourne and vice-versa in the year 2013. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the
price
for
tickets
for both vice-versa directions is particularly constant, not lower than 30$, and the
price
for
tickets
on Sunday
flight
remained at the same level of 50$ during two weeks in question.
To begin
with, a glance from the
first
diagram reveals that to fly on
Monday
was much expensive on
Week
1, compared to
Week
2, since there was a significant difference in 30$.
However
, comparing it to the
next
two days, Tuesday and Wednesday, we can notice that the
price
of
tickets
on these days was much cheaper than the
price
for the
Monday
, 35 $ respectively. Looking at the route from Melbourne to Sydney, it is worth mentioning that the
price
for
tickets
on
Monday
was much cheaper on the Week1, just 60$, compared to the same
week
on the
flight
from Sydney to Melbourne.
Similarly
, the
price
for the ticket on the
Monday
flight
of the
second
week
was lower than the
price
of
week
2, which was an opposite-route
flight
.
Likewise
, here the
price
for
tickets
on the Friday
flight
increased noticeably and levelled off at the 80$ in
Week
1. Yet, by the
second
week
, the value of the ticket on the Friday
flight
dropped to the 60$.
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