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Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers.

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The following bar charts display data on the
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 pricing on flights from Sydney to Melbourne and vice-versa in the year 2013. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the
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 for both vice-versa directions is particularly constant, not lower than 30$, and the
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 for
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 remained at the same level of 50$ during two weeks in question.
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 2, since there was a significant difference in 30$.
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, comparing it to the
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 two days, Tuesday and Wednesday, we can notice that the
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 of
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 on these days was much cheaper than the
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, 35 $ respectively. Looking at the route from Melbourne to Sydney, it is worth mentioning that the
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 for
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 on
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 was much cheaper on the Week1, just 60$, compared to the same
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 on the
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 from Sydney to Melbourne.
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, the
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flight
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 of the
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 on the Friday
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