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There is no doubt, that reading plays an important role in our life. Making a project about reading I found out an average number of
teenagers
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 in several genres and collected some data. I am going to comment on several key features of the results. Looking at the details, the most popular
genre
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 of
teenagers
 preferring
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teenagers
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 because it can easily catch your eye on its story, even if
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 isn’t as good as in some cases of romance or detective books. The less popular
genre
 is Romance with 17.6
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 of teenage readers. I think
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 unpopularity based on how boring
this
genre
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most
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teenagers
. According to the data in the table, sports
stories
 are more popular than animal
stories
, while sports
stories
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 49.2
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 of teenage respondents, animal
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 only 27.2, which is almost twice less. Another important thing to mention
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percent
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 difference with adventure
stories
, so both genres can catch
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 eye. One problem
that is
 probably connected with reading is that nowadays
teenagers
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 reading because of lack of good writers in all kinds of genres and
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 of their thoughts, it becomes very unidirectional and narrow-minded Summarizing everything up, my personal point of view is that reading is very helpful for poor people’s minds and it helps people think more versatile and be more educated.
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