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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

#country #language
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The importance of
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 which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many
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 are occurring with
people
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 who live in a
country
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 where speaking a foreign
speech
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. It is serious social
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problems
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 practical
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problems
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 faced by those
people
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. I completely agree with
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 statement and
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 elaborate on what type of obstacle
people
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 faced in different nations. commencing with the most prominent reason why
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 of languages are faced by mankind, the
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 and foremost one is that the communication gap between
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 who live in that
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, where speak a foreign
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 there
people
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 can not communicate with native
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.
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,
humans
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 can not build the relation
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 they felt lonely.
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, Indian
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 are speaking the Hindi
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 which is native
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.
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, they visited the USA at that time they have to speak English
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 which was the main problem faced by
people
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. Apart from
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humans
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 faced another obstacle is at the workplace.
people
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 who are working with MNC company which there have to speak an international
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 that time
people
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 do not understand work
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 they may do the mistakes in work.
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, another is that
people
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 who do not understand properly foreign
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 do not understand the art and traditions of those countries where they live. By
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,
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 can not understand the culture and traditions without the languages because
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 is the bridge between the civilization as well as the traditions of those countries.
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,
people
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 would be away from the culture.
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, anyone who is interesting in the history of any
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, they have to learn foreign
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then
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 they do study in
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 field due to the history of a
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 always print on its
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. To conclude, according to the argument one can reach the conclusion is that without different
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 of countries where migrant population live there they faced many issues
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 as at the workplace, communication and understanding of information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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