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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country, others say that thes are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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In current times, most
people
 tend to learn a new
language
, some societies believe the
people
 wanting to visit or work in another country need to learn a foreign
language
. Others opine that there are beyond reason for someone to learn a foreign accent. I agree with the latter opinion. On the one hand, the most enjoyable entertainment for the public is travelling, the
first
 and foremost thing is learning terminology before tripping.
In other words
, the vital thing for
people
 travelling to other country is
language
, that leads to communicating with other society , getting to know about culture.
Secondly
, pupils who go to a foreign university to study
,
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should be studying their courses in the International
language
;
in addition
, for their
expenditures
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 they need to catch a job. For more expression, if they know about the
language
 that country they lived, not only can they will study , but
also
 they will ger a job for their expenses.
On the other hand
, other
people
 believe a part of the community learns a
second
language
 for another reason.
For example
, they can see foreign movies without any subtitles and it would be more enjoyable than dubbed movies.
Moreover
, they could have read or heard about original news or magazines of another continent, to prevent a scattering of false news. To sum up, in these times, the number of
people
 LearnIng English is increasing, there is a lot of reasons for acquiring,except working and travelling. It could be very beneficial for them.
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