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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country, others say that thes are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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Introduction
In current times, most
people
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 tend to learn a new
language
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, some societies believe the
people
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 wanting to visit or work in another country need to learn a foreign
language
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. Others opine that there are beyond reason for someone to learn a foreign accent. I agree with the latter opinion.
Body paragraph 1
On the one hand, the most enjoyable entertainment for the public is travelling, the
first
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 and foremost thing is learning terminology before tripping.
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, the vital thing for
people
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 travelling to other country is
language
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, that leads to communicating with other society , getting to know about culture.
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, pupils who go to a foreign university to study
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should be studying their courses in the International
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;
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, for their
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 they need to catch a job. For more expression, if they know about the
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 that country they lived, not only can they will study , but
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 they will ger a job for their expenses.
Body paragraph 2
On the other hand
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, other
people
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 believe a part of the community learns a
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language
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 for another reason.
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, they can see foreign movies without any subtitles and it would be more enjoyable than dubbed movies.
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, they could have read or heard about original news or magazines of another continent, to prevent a scattering of false news.
Conclusion
To sum up, in these times, the number of
people
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 LearnIng English is increasing, there is a lot of reasons for acquiring,except working and travelling. It could be very beneficial for them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingualism
  • cultural immersion
  • cognitive skills
  • globalization
  • communication
  • perspective
  • folklore
  • cultural heritage
  • interpersonal relationships
  • self-development
  • linguistic diversity
  • travel experience
  • career prospects
  • language proficiency
  • enhance
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