You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

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Dear Ali Hi, How are you? I'm sorry that I replied so late to your email. I was so

busybeacuse

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busy because

of moving to a new

house

. My old

house

was very small and it was far away from my work, So I decided to rent

anothe

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another

house

This

house

is near my work and it's big enough. It has four rooms,

two

bathrooms, a beautiful kitchen and a big yard. It's

compeletly

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completely

furnish

Wrong verb form

furnished

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. In the living

room

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room,

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it has a big TV and the wi-fi is very good. There are

two

big windows

that

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where

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I can see

city

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the city

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and mountains. It's very nice. There is a lovely park near my

house

. So I can walk to it every evening.

Also

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Also,

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There are

two

highschool

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highschools

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across my

house

and my

dougter

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daughter

walk

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walks

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to school. There is a supermarket and a cafe is behind my

house

. I can go to the cinema about 5

minuts

Correct your spelling

minutes

and 15 minutes to the beach from my

house

. The airport is

two

km from here. I would like you to see my new

house

and I

wish

Verb problem

hope

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you can accept my invitation. With best wishes, Mehran

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

190 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people believe that education standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you thinks some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that we should not use animals as testing materials for human beings because this is too cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?