You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

Dear Ali Hi, How are you? I'm sorry that I replied so late to your email. I was so
busybeacuse
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busy because
of moving to a new
house
. My old
house
was very small and it was far away from my work, So I decided to rent
anothe
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another
house
.
This
house
is near my work and it's big enough. It has four rooms,
two
bathrooms, a beautiful kitchen and a big yard. It's
compeletly
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completely
furnish
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furnished
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. In the living
room
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room,
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it has a big TV and the wi-fi is very good. There are
two
big windows
that
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where
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I can see
city
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the city
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and mountains. It's very nice. There is a lovely park near my
house
. So I can walk to it every evening.
Also
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There are
two
highschool
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highschools
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across my
house
and my
dougter
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daughter
walk
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walks
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to school. There is a supermarket and a cafe is behind my
house
. I can go to the cinema about 5
minuts
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minutes
and 15 minutes to the beach from my
house
. The airport is
two
km from here. I would like you to see my new
house
and I
wish
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hope
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you can accept my invitation. With best wishes, Mehran
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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