Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Over the
last
two or three decades, people working hours have been increasing dramatically than ever before due to many reasons.
However
, a majority of people are worked long hours but
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extremely
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minimum duration for entertainment. I think
this
process has more drawbacks than
benefits
.
This
essay discusses briefly the following reasons.
To begin
with,
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are many drawbacks to working long
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and taking
less
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seconds for relaxation activities. One of the major disadvantages is that people would be suffered
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psycological
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psychological
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such
as stress and depression who
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less time for entertainment,
thus
, they might be killed themselves like suicide because depression is
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dangerous
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psychological
aspect in medical
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.
For example
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of
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suicidal cases are registered by working long hours. Another main drawback is that affecting work-life balance who the working folks which they cannot give more
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in both employment as well as their's personal life too,
as a result
, they might be lost their's job and family.
On the other hand
,
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are many
benefits
to working more times and takes minimum duration of entertainment. One of the major
benefits
is that the working persons earn many
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from
this
along with promotion
similarly
because they do not take more
holidyas
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holidays
.
For instance
, Indian companies provide annual gifts for taking less holiday in working period,
as a result
, many working folks do not like to take more leave even they like to work in the government holidays too. To conclude, working persons should be taken leave for their's relaxation activities. Getting promotions and annual gifts is the
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of
this
process. Affecting work-life balance and getting
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psychological
problem is the
disdavantages
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disadvantages
. In my opinion, about
this
,
this
trend has more drawbacks than
benefits
.
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