Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Over the

last

two or three decades, people working hours have been increasing dramatically than ever before due to many reasons.

However

, a majority of people are worked long hours but

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extremely

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minimum duration for entertainment. I think

this

process has more drawbacks than

benefits

.

This

essay discusses briefly the following reasons.

To begin

with,

There

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are many drawbacks to working long

period

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and taking

less

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seconds for relaxation activities. One of the major disadvantages is that people would be suffered

in

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psycological

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psychological

problem

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problems

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such

as stress and depression who

taking

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less time for entertainment,

thus

, they might be killed themselves like suicide because depression is

the

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dangerous

psycological

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psychological

aspect in medical

term

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.

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, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of

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suicidal cases are registered by working long hours. Another main drawback is that affecting work-life balance who the working folks which they cannot give more

attentions

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in both employment as well as their's personal life too,

as a result

, they might be lost their's job and family.

On the other hand

,

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are many

benefits

to working more times and takes minimum duration of entertainment. One of the major

benefits

is that the working persons earn many

salary

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from

this

along with promotion

similarly

because they do not take more

holidyas

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holidays

.

For instance

, Indian companies provide annual gifts for taking less holiday in working period,

as a result

, many working folks do not like to take more leave even they like to work in the government holidays too. To conclude, working persons should be taken leave for their's relaxation activities. Getting promotions and annual gifts is the

advantages

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of

this

process. Affecting work-life balance and getting

psycological

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psychological

problem is the

disdavantages

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disadvantages

. In my opinion, about

this

,

this

trend has more drawbacks than

benefits

.