You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, shopping becomes very easy due to advanced technology so that,
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of
people
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support that ideology whereas,
other
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others
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oppose it. I personally love
this
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way of shopping because it makes life so easy and removes lots of
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.
Firstly
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, the main reason is
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can buy
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anything
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any thing
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anything
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online from various sites which give them not only variety but
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discounts.
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, it saves their time like, in pasts,
people
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find things from going shop to shop but, now everything is under in your just one click.
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,
last
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month, my friend had
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, but I had no time to buy a
gift
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for him. So, I chose a
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for him from
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online shopping site, they wrapped it properly and delivered it on time after got that
gift
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my friend called me and said thank you I felt so happy and
reliefed
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relieved
because he was satisfied by my
gift
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.
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, sometimes,
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face scams problems due to online shopping because there are too many sites which
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hacked or created by hackers
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,
people
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lose their money . So that, they try to avoid
to shop
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shopping
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online.
In addition
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, sometimes, customers get damaged products after that, they face lots of trouble to replace and repair them. In conclusion,
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sometimes,
people
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face trouble during online shopping, it is
best
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the best
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way to buy
a
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the
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latest product because it is a Demand
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the
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apply
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life because
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apply
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life is now very busy and hectic.
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