Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both views and give your opinion
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was relied
on many facts and principles were developed by researchers who studied the facts. Sharing Change to the active voice
relied
has relied
informations
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information
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with
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others
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develop
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people
to Use synonyms
stole
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steal
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attribute
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the right of Wrong verb form
forfeit
others
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we will Add a comma
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both points of view and explain why I support Correct your spelling
discuss
to share
the Change the verb form
sharing
informations
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information
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within
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limits.
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certain
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of all, sharing Linking Words
informations
and concepts in different Change the wording
information
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aspect
can fill the gaps.If we take the scientific research in Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
medical
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the medical
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field
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example, we can Change preposition
as an
found
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find
trail
results between physicians before prescribed to humen. If any physician Correct your spelling
trial
keep
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keeps
this
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the end of any scientific Change the preposition
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paper
we can read the ethical principle and the recommendations from the researcher about the shortcomings that he faced in his study and what the researcher who comes after him should do.
On other hand, many thoughts Add a comma
,paper
dicscussed
sharing Correct your spelling
discussed
impression
to Fix the agreement mistake
impressions
others
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scientific
study make some issues between Add an article
the scientific
people
. Use synonyms
For example
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a high
dose
of radiation in Fix the agreement mistake
doses
neck
area. Add an article
the neck
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, studying the Correct your spelling
Therefore
effectivness
of radiation on those patients were become efficient by using Correct your spelling
effectiveness
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standard
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a standared
tool
. After that , I Fix the agreement mistake
tools
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that he did a proposal with my concept. I become sad and Add a missing verb
was surprised
downharted
from his act.
I strongly supported sharing ideas or Correct your spelling
downhearted
cocepts
in our life is paramount, Correct your spelling
concepts
becuase
sharing is caring Correct your spelling
because
of
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for
others
feelings and Use synonyms
khowledge
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knowledge
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good
way with trusted Change the article
a good
people
maybe lead to Use synonyms
solve
mistakes and Wrong verb form
solving
help
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helping
others
.
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between
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apply
us
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apply
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a moral
every one
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everyone
stay
satisfied.Change the verb form
stays
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