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Millions of people every year move to English speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study English? Why is English such an important international language?

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Every year the number of
people
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 who immigrate to
countries
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 that have
English
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 as their mother
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,
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 as America, Australia or Britain for education purposes. Due to the fact that
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 will get more opportunities for their career if they can speak more than two languages.
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, as
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 is a worldwide
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, almost everyone in
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world
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 knows basic
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;
therefore
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 everyone can communicate easily even if they are from different
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.
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 of all, the reason why many
people
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 in
countries
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 that do not have
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 as their
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language
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 choose to learn
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 and their
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language
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 is to be able to gain more opportunities in their life. As
English
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 is the most spoken
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 in the
world
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 it helps
people
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 to communicate with global citizens efficiently. In
this
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 case, those who can use
English
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 smoothly can gain more opportunities than others.
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, the main factor employers look at before they accept their new employees is
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, if individuals can speak well in
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 that will become their strength.
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, many huge companies like Google, Amazon, and Microsoft are located in
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 speaking
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;
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 employees in these large companies are all able to speak
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 to allow them to connect with their co-workers.
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, as
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 is the most spoken
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 in the
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 it helps
people
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 to communicate with global citizens efficiently. Back in the past many
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 in Asia, Africa have been colonie by Europeans or Americans.
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, over 50
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 in
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world
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 have
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 as their official
language
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. In fact, governments from many
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 see that
English
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 has become critical these days so many schools provide
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 classes for students from the kindergarten level.
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, after years of learning
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, society knows at least basic
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. In conclusion,
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 has been used globally for many decades. For someone who is able to use
English
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 efficiently will grow in their career path, and it has become an important
language
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 because over half of the
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's population use
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language
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