One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

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New colonies are developing at a fast pace in
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era of urbanization.
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creates the biggest problem on the globe because the
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is approving new housing schemes for a rapidly incremental population. Whereas, there are so many efforts for environmental protection is going on. I have shared my points of view and opinion in the
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paragraphs. To commence with, building new homes are significant for ongoing population demand as
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is the responsibility of the
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to provide shelter to every citizen. But as cities are getting expanded, authorities need to cut jungles and
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to accommodate citizens in them.
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. in 1983 Brampton
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was not even existed, only big fams and jungles existed. After 5 years in 1988, the
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government
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building was built, as Toronto is getting expanded, people started moving to Brampton, so the
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had to remove all farmlands,
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and needed to build houses on it which is really devastating for the
environment
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. On the other side, saving our greeneries is
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a vital role of authorities, so they make gardens in cities and
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implement eco-friendly
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policies.
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, in Brampton, house-owners can not cut any
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which are available in the backyard and on sidewalks without obtaining permission from the
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service.
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policies make living suitable for humans and the
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.
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services
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should encourage people to plant as many
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and plants in backyards and should provide financial support to buying crops and fertilizers that undoubtedly leave positive impacts on the
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. I opine, on one side governments are expanding cities and providing roofs to people as
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is a part of their duties, but they
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have power, resources and technologies to make newly built societies livable by taking care of surroundings and
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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