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By definition, charity is generosity in offering money, food, and help to the needy. To some people, such kindness should be boundless, others argue for a limit to it.” Which opinion do you support? In about 300 words, present your arguments.

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Nowadays, charitable works are done more often by the
people
, to the
people
 who are in need without any boundaries which raised conflicts in the
people
 who believe that the charity
work
 should be kept in
limts
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limits
. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter. to commence with donations
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people
 who are in need are done without any limits which
is
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 adverse, because
of
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apply
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the boundless act of donation for the poor can make the
indivual
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individual
 lazy.
Moreover
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 it can make
people
 not to
work
 effectively.
For
example
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 the study has shown that in many parts of
india
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 many
people
 are becoming less productive because of the boundless donations
receiving
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 from the NGO's and other trust funds.
on the other hand
, by limiting the donations the pupil who
are
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incesasantly
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incessantly
 depending on the charity works can come out of their
comfornt
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comfort
 zone and tend to
work
 more efficiently for living. Considering the fact it is kindness to help
people
 but, limiting the fund does not harm anyone.
additionaly
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additionally
, it brings awareness in the
socirty
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society
 to
work
 hard for their own living In conclusion, the boundless act
charity
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, thinking that can help the needy
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may be
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maybe
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 less effective than keeping boundaries.
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