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Some people believe that children who are brought up in families which don’t have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up in wealthier families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The financial situation of any family has a great impact on their
children
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. Some claim if the
children
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 grow up in a family with no more money, they will be able to
face
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 many
life
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 problems in the future more than those who grow up in wealthy
families
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. I completely agree with
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 view as those youngs will be raised as more creative and dependent individuals, because of their family economic situation.
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 essay will discuss these reasons in depth in the following paragraphs. When
children
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 grow up in weak economic situations and
face
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 many financial
issues
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, that affected them positively to be more creative. Because of their position, they learnt how to deal with different
life
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issues
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 from an early age.
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, most of the famous celebrities come from
families
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 with limited economic abilities
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 as Well Smith. Without a hard
life
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 experience, many of them may not be as creative as they should
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,
children
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 from
families
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 with no more money, have a great chance to be creative in dealing with their prospective
life
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 problems than others.
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, if there is not enough money,
children
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 will be more dependent in their future
life
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. Due to their economic situation, those
children
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 will have to work, which eventually make them more confident and dependent,
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 tackling their planned
life
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issues
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 as easy as more.
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, in the USA, more than 60% of successful adults, had
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financial
dilemmas
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 when they were young, according to a Washington University report in 2020. Without
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 early
life
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 experience, many of them may not be able to
face
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 their current
life
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 problem.
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, to
face
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life
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 problems as depend as more,
children
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 should experience some financial difficulties. In conclusion,
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 essay agreed with the ability of
children
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 from poor
families
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 to
face
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 future
life
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issues
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 more than others from wealthy
families
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.
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 because of their creativity and dependence, that they acquire
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 of their economic status.
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