You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Mr Tara, I am writing to you concerning an article that I read from your magazine dated 25th of December about Oyo
town
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, which happens to be my
town
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.
However
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,
this
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story is incorrect and I would like to point it out to you.
For instance
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, it was mentioned in your magazine that we have less than 20,000 people in the
town
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,
however
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according to the
last
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census held, the city has a population of above 50,000 but less than 75,000 people. I would like to emphasise that it is absolutely necessary for an international travel magazine like yours to give accurate and consistent data because your newsletter is widely read and incorrect reports as mentioned above will be disseminated to nationals of other countries.
This
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will give a skew perception of our
town
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. In conclusion, I would like to suggest to your editorial team to please find a way to filter any information that will be printed for your esteemed customers.
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, if there are any doubts or need to verify any information before putting it in print,
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it would be better to consult with the natives of the place or country to verify any claims. An approach as
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will help your team to have validated information for your readers. I do hope my suggestions will be taken going forward to help readers get the best out of your prints. Thank you and have a lovely day ahead. Yours faithfully, Rotimi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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