The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram shows the data about Yemen and Italian
people
with their ages in 2000 and projection
for 2050.
We can see that the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
projections
of
60+ Remove the redundancy
apply
years
old population in Yemen is on
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at
the
dramatically higher level compared to schoolchildren in 2000. Correct article usage
a
While
adult people
between 15 and 59 years
have nearer
percentage Add an article
a nearer
to
the old. We can see that the majority of Change preposition
than
people
in Yemen are between 0-14 years
. Whereas
in 2050 projection it will be replaced by 15-59 years
old people
(57.3%). The old population will increase slightly from 3.6% to 5.7% but still
it is Add a comma
,still
on
the lowest percentage among other ages. It is clear from the Change preposition
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char
that teenager groups go down rapidly from 50.1% to 37% between 2000 and 2050.
In Italy 15-59 Correct your spelling
chart
years
old people
maintain its
highest level in Correct pronoun usage
their
the
both Remove the article
apply
years
. Whereas
the number of people
with 60+ years
will go up in
a considerable amount from 24.1% in 2000 to 42.3% in 2050. Change preposition
apply
0
-14 Correct article usage
The 0
years
group will dip down gradually by 3%.
In conclusion,60+ years
old people
have an upward trend in both countries.Submitted by ulkerh999 on
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