You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words

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Dear Mr Ali, I am the girl who had that accident

last

Thursday, and I am writing

this

letter to thank you for your significant help.

In addition

, I will be very glad if you accept my request to share a dinner with you at my home

this

weekend.

First

, I want to introduce myself. My name is China Tarhini and I am a civil engineer. That day, I was heading to visit a site when I was exposed to an accident on the main road.

However

, after getting to the hospital, the nurse informed me that a brave man saved me from the fire that hit my car and brought me to the medical centre. Honestly, I heavily appreciate your aid.

Also

, I want to thank you for your brave attitude when you rescued your life to save mine. In fact, I am in debt for you for my whole life.

Therefore

, I am requesting you and your family to visit my home if is it possible. Hopefully, you could accept my invitation. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, China Tarhini.

Submitted by eng.ali.hammoud.26 on Thu Dec 16 2021

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

186 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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