The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

The line graph illustrates the

quantity

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number

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of

people

using the London subway system

in

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apply

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the

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apply

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intervals of 18 hours. Looking at the chart, the horizontal axis depicts the hours from 6 a.m to 10 p.m

while

the vertical axis indicates the number of

people

in a range of 0 to a maximum of 450. In general, the data fluctuated with a downward trend. At 6 o’clock in the morning, there are about 100 passengers at the station. After that, it grows suddenly to reach a peak point of 400 persons at 8.00.

Next

, the number of

people

reduce significantly to slightly under 200 at 10 a.m. From 10.00 onward, the figure for passengers rises continuously to hit 300 persons by 14.00 and

then

declines sharply to hit the lowest point of just below 100 at 16.00 in the afternoon. After

which

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time, the number of passengers

are

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apply

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seen at the station

increase

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increases

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rapidly to around an average of 380

people

and

then

drop

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drops

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to slightly less than 150.