The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

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of

people

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using the London subway system

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the

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apply

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intervals of 18 hours. Looking at the chart, the horizontal axis depicts the hours from 6 a.m to 10 p.m

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the vertical axis indicates the number of

people

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in a range of 0 to a maximum of 450. In general, the data fluctuated with a downward trend. At 6 o’clock in the morning, there are about 100 passengers at the station. After that, it grows suddenly to reach a peak point of 400 persons at 8.00.

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, the number of

people

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reduce significantly to slightly under 200 at 10 a.m. From 10.00 onward, the figure for passengers rises continuously to hit 300 persons by 14.00 and

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declines sharply to hit the lowest point of just below 100 at 16.00 in the afternoon. After

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time, the number of passengers

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seen at the station

increase

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increases

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rapidly to around an average of 380

people

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and

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drop

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drops

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to slightly less than 150.