Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

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The topic of contamination of
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areas becoming increasingly actual nowadays.A lot of people all over the world paid attention to
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concern .So let us
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topic more deeply .
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,we can not deny the fact that humanity is the cause of
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infection .Many factories drain waste into rivers .Probably ,they are doing it because top brass thinks that it is too expensive to recycle waste material properly.
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,contamination of
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does not always happen out of human greed.Sometimes it occurs accidentally.
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,a shipwreck and
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fuel which was on the ship got in the
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.
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,
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pollution creates a lot of problems for human society as for
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.Thousands of
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died per year and millions suffer from
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contamination .We can observe a lot of photos and articles on the internet about it.And they all about which effects it is have for the animal world.Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas mostly decrease the population of fish who lives there.But ,in nature everything is connected and if one of these
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will disappear
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others too.
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,if the fish are smaller
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the
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that feed on them start to starve and their populations decrease and so on.
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,it is affected humanity too.Without ,
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we do not have enough to eat. To draw the conclusion ,I can say that pollution of
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areas is a major concern of 21 century .We should protect our environment because if we do not do it we and our children will leave in a world where everyone suffers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contamination
  • industrial discharge
  • untreated sewage
  • agricultural runoff
  • pesticides
  • oil spills
  • microplastics
  • eutrophication
  • algal blooms
  • marine dumping
  • bioaccumulation
  • ecosystem
  • biodiversity
  • public health
  • waterborne diseases
  • fishing industry
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental regulations
  • waste management
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