Some people say that students who achieve the highest score in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Part of society argues that students achieving the greatest

score

in their exams should be rewarded while many people believe those showing

progress

should be rewarded too. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion from my perspective. On the

one

hand, many pupils are influenced to get the highest

score

in order to get lots of praise both from teachers and parents.

As a result

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in school as the clever

one

.

Furthermore

, it is commonly known in educational circumstances that their children are promised by their parents that they can get a number of gifts if they can achieve the greatest

score

.

For instance

, take me as an example, when

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was in junior high school, I tend to

study

hard to get the better

score

that

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can achieve and wake up early to

study

, which will boost my energy to learn if I get rewarded to buy some toys that I was looking for.

On the other hand

, it is believed that not only the clever

one

who should get praises and rewards, but

also

the

one

striving hard to

study

although

do not get the highest result. I believe that every student is created to have different talents in various

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. Talking about school in my home country, Indonesia, students in my country nowadays are highly focused on result-oriented rather than the

progress

itself and

in addition

, they tend to focus on exact courses like Maths and Physics, where not all students have expertise in those fields.

Therefore

, pupils who already try their best to

study

the courses and show

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good

progress

although

do not get the tremendous

score

should be rewarded

instead

. To sum up, children who achieve the greatest result as well as those who show better

progress

of learning

although

do not accomplish the highest

score

,

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should be rewarded. Having

this

said, I believe that regardless of their

score

, every student has their own talent and need to be dug to maximize their skills.