It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

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promotion and care is a fundamental issue that every government should put into consideration during budgeting and it is a grey area that needs to be handled with great care.

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it is imperative to utilize community resources advocating for a healthy way of living so as to stop sickness rather than to use it on the management of people who are already sick.Indeed

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completely agree and

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advocacy will save the state enough funds that would have been used in medical treatment.

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is because it enhances the quality of life for all people

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that there is a reduction

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premature deaths.

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,the training of community leaders is very significant to the society as they will support the government in following up on the

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of the village best

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status.

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,80% of heart diseases and stroke can be prevented by eliminating common risk factors.

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,a society without illness will save the nation a lot of funds.

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to well-being,good healthcare should be available and accessible to everyone who is not feeling well.

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,the parliament pays the state healthcare to manage sick patients in the community.Medical treatment is very expensive

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that billions of money is allocated for

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care especially those patients with comorbidity who requires frequent services and daily medications.

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sector takes over 40% of the Uganda financial budget yearly.

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,a healthy nation will come along with the utilization of funds which,

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,can be saved through healthy advocacy. To sum up,the government is sorely responsible for a healthy nation.To illustrate more,promotion of proper diet,regular exercises should be emulated and if not, the situation will increase the burden to the hospitals and taxpayers.