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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today's rapid age of modernization, a person's longevity is increasing thanks to the development of medical treatments.
As a result
, in a long run, the group of people who are older than 60 years old will make up a large amount of the population, which can lead to a range of social issues relating to their health
care
. From my perspective, I will elaborate on the reasons why I think that society will come up with possible solutions to tackle
this
 problem.
Firstly
, nowadays when technology has become an integral part of life, it assists us to take
care
 of our beloved ones. As a matter of fact, there is no doubt that modern life keeps the young citizens busy, the pressure to keep up, to look after the elders is supposed to be difficult.
However
, with the advance of high-tech, social media now allows employers to connect with the individuals who are willing to help them
care
 for their parents or grandparents no matter where they are. An illustration of
this
 is given by my friend Tan, who is a typical busy salaryman, via facebook recruitment, he got his mother a
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 who has been a great help for 3 years so far.
Secondly
, in developed countries particularly, scientists have been researching and ending up with a variety of methods to cure or slow down severe illnesses
such
 as diabetes, cancer, or heart disease.
Besides
, the early symptoms of those health problems can be diagnosed so that the elders have more opportunities to reduce the risk of being exposed to deadly diseases. All things considered, it seems to me that we modern people will be able to deal with magnificent growth in the number of the old due to the improvement of technology and medical systems.
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