People are increasingly becoming concerned about protecting the environment from pollution caused by fossil fuels. Much of the pollution comes from car engines and some have suggested electric cars could be the solution. Do you think electric cars could be better for the environment? What are their advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays environmental pollution has increased
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untolerable
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intolerable
rate. The main reason for
this
is
carbon
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emission that comes from
vehicles
.
Therefore
, some are suggesting that electrical
cars
will solve
this
issue
. In
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I will be discussing why in my opinion electrical
cars
could help in decreasing environmental problems and
also
their pros and cons.
To begin
with, we can not deny that the cardinal reason for many environmental issues
such
as climate change is the fossil fuels and mainly carbon tailpipes that come from car engines.
Therefore
, using electric
cars
will bring many advantages
such
as emission reduction due to the fact that all electrical
vehicles
rely on rechargeable batteries. Driving an
electrical
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car does not create any tailpipe emissions which is considered the main reason for climate change.
Moreover
, all
electrical
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vehicles
are
also
high performance
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vehicles
whose motor is not only quiet and smooth but require less maintenance than internal combustion engines.
However
,
although
electrical
cars
are environmentally friendly, these
cars
have many cons.
Firstly
, electric
cars
travel less distance than gas-powered
cars
. In comparison between the two will full
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battery
the electrical one can travel up to 120 miles where the regular
cars
with
full
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tank can travel up to 300 miles.
Furthermore
, electric
cars
take ages to refuel . fueling electrical
cars
is a major
issue
for their owners, charging an
electrical
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vehicle can take up to 8 hours . To sum up , overall electrical
vehicles
like any vehicle have its benefits and disadvantages, in my
opinion
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believe that environmental pollution is a much bigger
issue
and by using only electrical
cars
would help in decreasing the
issue
but it will not solve it .
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