Some people think that children should study in school the subject of science of food and how to prepare it properly. Other think it is a waste of time, because there are more important subjects to study. Discuss both views and give your opinion with reasons and relevant examples."
Some may argue that
children
should have the subject of the science of nourishment in their study curriculum and they should learn to provide cooking properly, Use synonyms
However
, others believe that Linking Words
children
have more vital Use synonyms
subjects
to study and it is squandered of time. I am opposed to the latter view and believe students need to learn to cook.
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Firstly
, cooking is one of the basic skills which is needed for becoming independent. Linking Words
Children
must learn to provide Use synonyms
food
without their parents and it will absolutely make their adulthood easier because they will be able to feed themselves without any problem. Use synonyms
In addition
, nutrition has an important effect on health. The sooner Linking Words
children
know the nutritious Use synonyms
food
, the more they try to have a better diet and it helps them to have a healthy lifestyle. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
children
who are educated about the drawbacks of junk foods try to avoid them as much as possible.
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On the other hand
, core Linking Words
subjects
like mathematics and physics are essential for their future career life. recruiters of every company assess the scores of core lessons before anything else and it shows the important role of these lessons in job opportunities and without studying those Use synonyms
subjects
they will lose the career competition in the future. Use synonyms
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, I think due to the importance of healthy nutrition in Linking Words
children
's quality of life spending limited hours a weak on Use synonyms
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subjects
will not harm other core Use synonyms
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.
To conclude, I believe despite some Use synonyms
subjects
are crucial for people's job opportunity in the future but nutrition should be taught at schools too because Use synonyms
food
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite