Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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belief that discovering new

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of fossil

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in intact and isolated areas of the Earth proves indispensable in regard to increasing demand for them.

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finding a new origin of gas and oil has many benefits, the drawbacks involved are of importance to be scrutinised. On the plus side, it may appear that

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in the intact region proves beneficial. The

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underlying justification is concerned with improving the living standard of humans

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in developing countries that are completely relied on

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for their vital necessities

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as heating their houses, producing goods and running

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cars and planes. Simply put, the new

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which are discovered in the isolated parts of

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help to not only

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the quality of living but

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directly

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gives a sense of convenience and welfare to individuals.

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finding extra energy

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is required

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large number of labours. As a direct result, it provides a wide range of job opportunities including digging, road construction, installing pipelines for

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. Having said that, the downsides of finding new energy

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should not be underestimated.

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with, it seems that takes a devastating toll on

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nature and biodiversity. To be more precise, it is essential that natural habitats of animals and plants

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destroyed and replaced by necessary infrastructures

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finding extra

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of energy.

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workers, some accommodations are established in these areas that lead to some flora and fauna species

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of extinction. an obvious example of

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, the number of polar bears is

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decades due to

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pole. On balance, the tendency of detecting new

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in untouched areas would be both rewarding and problematic. While it may guarantee

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quality of human life,

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is highly likely

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from its dire consequences