It is widely believed that consumerism is vital for the economic well-being of a country. However others feel that consumerism has unacceptable social consequences on a society. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The consumption of goods and services boosts the economic growth of the nation
therefore
, lots of
people
support it, whereas, others believe that it has
adverse
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effect on
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society
. I personally think that the expenditure
collectes
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collected
from buying the material solves many problems like providing jobs and
fulfillment
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the
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demond of needy
people
as well.
First
of all,
public
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welcome
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consumerism because it gives the products and services which
people
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in their daily life.
Moreover
, the employment rate is
also
enhanced by the consumption of goods,
therefore
, many handicrafts get
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an appreciation
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for their work in
the
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society
.
For example
, my friend is a painter, who makes many paintings but, now
people
show their interest toward these type thing due to
this
, he earns
good
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income and
also
become
inspiration
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an inspiration
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for other
people
who want to join
this
field.
However
, it has some negative impact on
society
as well as
people
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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, because they become materialistic. Sometimes, crowed buy unwanted products which will affect their pockets. Apart from that, if the supply of products is increased it will affect the environment
also
because
more
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raw material is used, they should keep
also
an alternative for any situation like
people
use paper their more plant and trees are used for making paper due to
this
,
government
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the government
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takes some strict action to prevent the environment. In conclusion,
although
consumerism has bad effects on nature, it makes
the
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life easy and comfortable so, it is important for well fair os
society
as well as
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, as well as people,
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people
should show their responsibilities for
the
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nature which is
also
important for upcoming generations.
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