Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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The latest
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invention
of
technology
advanced our daily
life
. We use various items in our home and work and we can't even
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think
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thing
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think
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the world without
such
invention
.
This
eassy
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easy
will discuss the development of our
life
by
invention
latest
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the latest
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technology
. The biggest achievement of our modern age is electricity. Without it, In my
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opinion
openion
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no one will think
a
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civilized word. From morning to till sleep we use a lot of essential goods by using electricity.
Such
as TV, Fans, AC, Computer, Electric
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cooker
etc. It helps to minimize our
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workload
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work load
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and develop our society. It
also
improves our way of
life
.
For example
,
invention
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the invention
an invention
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of
cell
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the cell
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phone improved our lifestyle. With
this
within a short
time
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,time
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we can communicate with so many
people
without
traveling
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it. It saves us
times
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time
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and we can concentrate
with
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on
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another
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other
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work.
On the other hand
, it has
also
some
drawback
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drawbacks
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. With
this
advancement of
technology
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,technology
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people
are more used to involve with it.
People
spending
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more time on social media
instead
of visiting friends or relative house. For
this
people
are more selfish and
reduced
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reduce
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their love
to
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for
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other
people
. In conclusion, though there is some drawback
about
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to
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technology
development
but
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there is huge advancement
of
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in
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technology
which is really improved our way of
life
.
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