Some people have the same type of job throughout their lifetime, while other prefer to change the type of job they do. Discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion?

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occupation.most of them want to
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their same
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in the whole lifetime whereas others are liking most to Change the
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continuously.
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giving my opinion. The most one is that some
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's are so conservative.they don't want to go outside without family.Because some times
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needed to go one place to another.not everyone
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to go far from the family and sometimes same
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give the promotion for the experience and give expected salary.That's why they are always want to do the same
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and stay with the family.
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some
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benefited them they think.if the
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changes from one place to another sometimes
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working experience give better
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changes. My opinion always
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that both are well as the perspective of different
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are more.
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for the
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helpful thing to do any kind of
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. To conclude
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are doing
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their own perspective. And both are
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Job security
  • Stability
  • Expertise
  • Mastery
  • Career advancement
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Acquiring
  • Skills
  • Knowledge
  • Exploring
  • Career paths
  • Opinion
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