Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.

Nowadays, people in many countries arrange a grand ceremony
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their wedding where they spend a bulk amount of money for
this
reason some people thinks
this
is
waste
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of money. I
also
think that
this
money can be used for the children who are not able to
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meals residing in
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an orphanage
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orphanage
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.
This
essay will
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elaborate
my points for both sides. Proponents who support
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a grand expenditure on marriage mainly argue the memories they want to create on that day. People think the ceremony like marriage
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once in life and
this
is the reason they should create memories of every event and
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them
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camera by both ways videos and still images, so that, they can cherish the time in their elder ages.
For example
,
commuity
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community
centers
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are common in every
cities
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and even in sub-rural settings in Bangladesh. These
centers
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have several arrangements of stage, lighting, camera and meal
sttings
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settings
sittings
built in there. They have the all settings to make the events a tremendously enjoyable environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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