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Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programs. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.

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Some
people
 feel that importing movies and television programmes from other countries
is
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 good for a country's
culture
, whereas others believe that producing these locally is much better. I will discuss both views and give my own opinion in the following essay. There are some reasons why
people
 think it is beneficial for the
culture
 of a country to buy foreign
films
 and programmes.
To begin
 with,
this
 is
such
 a good way to facilitate the
co- operation
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 among nations around the world. It is undeniable to say that we are now living in globalization, so if we have a basic understanding of cultural practices through these movies, it will be easier
to
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 us to integrate into other societies.
Furthermore
, they believe that these overseas movies and programmes play an important role in diversifying their own
culture
. Thanks to
these
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this
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 series, citizens will know more about
others tradition
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other traditions
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 of other nations which allows them to enrich their own
tradition
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traditions
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. One good illustration of
this
 is that when we
watching
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 Korean’s
films
 or shows and as a
consequence
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 we will find out more about
cultural
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 traits of
this
 nation and choose what
tradition
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 traits of that country is suitable to apply to our nation.
On the other hand
, some
people
 are in favour of producing these domestically due to two leading reasons. One of them could be that it is more convenient for
producer
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a producer
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 to convey their desired
messeges
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messages
 to viewers. Guests or casts in these
films
 are too familiar with
audience
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the audience
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;
therefore
;
people
 can easily understand what the meaning of
this
programm
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programme
program
 is.
Consequently
, they will gain in-depth knowledge about their
culture
 in an interesting way.
Besides
, when these
films
 are produced locally
producer
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producers
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 can give more and more various valuable traditions to viewers without having permission for
copyright
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the copyright
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. In conclusion, there are some benefits for both kinds of
this
produce
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product
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,
however
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,however
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 I am still in
opinion
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the opinion
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 of having these
films
 and programs produced locally. -325 words-
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