Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live Write an email to your friend. In your email Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Alex, Hope you are doing fine today. I was excited to receive a letter from you after a long time. Your decision to apply for masters at Tata Management institute was spot on and as am an
alumni
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same university will provide tips on finding the right accommodation for you. For my
first
,semester I use to stay at my college hostel, as I was new in the place.
Then
eventually after I made a few friends within my batch, we moved to a quarter that was in the centre of the city. Our reason to shift to there was that we had access to endless water supply and no power cuts, which was frequent at our college accommodation. So, I would suggest you check for rental housing accommodation near the city, with the help of a Facebook site you will find a number of ads on requirements for roommates. I would
also
advise you to look for roommates who are students as they can understand your needs and help you during exams.
Also
, a word of caution, please do read the terms and conditions mentioned over the rental agreement before agreeing with the landlord of the property.
This
is important when you are about to vacant your room after completion of your degree. I hope
this
suggestion will prove to be of some assistance in your pursuit. I will be waiting for your reply Warm regards Sachin
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dormitories
  • rental agreements
  • house-hunting
  • budgeting
  • commute
  • utilities
  • security deposit
  • lease
  • proximity
  • amenities
  • landlord
  • tenant rights
  • real estate agent
  • furnished/unfurnished
  • flatmates
  • on-campus/off-campus living
  • viewings
  • public transportation
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