Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extiction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Destroying the rain jungles is an important issue and it probably causes to the life of flora and fauna
also
people.I strongly agree with
this
topic and we will discuss it as detailed in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost, the conservation of trees in the forest is very significant for
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nature since it helps to control global warming and
protecting
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the environment.
Moreover
,groves have the main part to prevent natural calamities and other disasters.
Secondly
,
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the forests may cause
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the abolition of the natural habitat of animals live and their food resources.
For instance
,in India,lost a hundred acres of uninhabited lands became inhabited place due to the unethical natural nonconservation,
therefore
, several specious not exist now as per the current survey.
Thirdly
,various types of
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occurring
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because of
this
issue like
earth
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quake
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,landslides and floods are happening all around the earth occasionally.
On the other hand
,societies have the main responsibility on
this
issue because
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some government authorities and a certain number of landholders are cut the trees to
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their places to build new construction or any other kind of activities.Nowadays, all across the world,humans are facing serious miserable weather conditions since decreasing
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flora.Many rivers and ponds are becoming tiny after the unethical process started on the earth,
thus
the reason for
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of fish sources and other creatures.
For example
, the world's biggest forest Amazon boundaries are reduced compared with past decades and most of the species in at
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. In conclusion,I strongly agree with
this
point and
also
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that the
govenment
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government
should enforce
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a strict
strict
rule to protect
this
land from
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activities by the human.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • sustainable
  • ecosystem
  • carbon emissions
  • indigenous communities
  • sustainable forest management
  • desertification
  • ecological balance
  • water cycle
  • carbon dioxide absorption
  • habitat destruction
  • environmental degradation
  • climate change impact
  • economic losses
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