In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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After finishing high school many young folks decide to take a
gap
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year
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before going for studies.
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, in some
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it is obligatory to find a job or travel for
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particular
year
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. While, it has some significant merits,
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as gaining
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experience, it may result
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in not
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taking courses at all. In
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essay
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by presenting relevant examples. One of the biggest
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from
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not going to the university
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after graduating is the experience achieved from additional activities,
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as volunteering. International exchanges have
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of benefits,
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, young citizens can broaden their minds and because of
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they would have had
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opportunity to get to know themselves. Volunteering has always inspired people and encouraged them to be a better version of themselves. If more young adults have had decided to do so, they would have not
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depicted
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university
programm
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totally without thinking or in rush.
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, after taking a
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year
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a significant part of society does not apply for studies, at all, because the imagination of
studing
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studying
for the
next
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5 years or more is uncannily unmotivating and they have gotten used to
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the current
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situation during
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period of time.
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, a person who has been
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for the
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straight does not see himself
setteling
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settling
down again, the reason for not wanting the enormous fun of
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to stop.
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, a
gap
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year
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may discourage young developing
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community
from
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education leaving them without
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a master
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degree.
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a result, it would have been difficult for them to find a satisfying job. To sum up, citizens should have
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to develop and find themselves during a
gap
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year
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because they would avoid making rush
decissions
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decisions
that they would have
regreted
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regretted
later. I am
stronly
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strongly
concerned that all the advantages,
such
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as life experiences far more overshadow any disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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