some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. but others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is argued by some people that all
subjects
are important for youngsters to study whereas , it is believed by other pessimists that only the single
subject
should be focused by them in which they are more interested . It has
disagreed
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that only
one
subject
is sufficient to concentrate on . In the aforementioned ,paragraphs these points of view will be discussed before providing a liable conclusion. Undoubtedly ,
one
should go for that
field
in the future in which he or she is interested , but by studying that only
subject
one
can not get fully successful in life because the
subjects
which are provided to teenagers for study are compulsory for them so that they can gain knowledge about every
field
in order to develop them mentally and socially .
For instance
, in the schools children are not only taught any particular
subject
but all basic
subjects
are available there which are essential for their personality development
such
as ;
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science which is present in every aspect of life , social science which tells us about geography , politics , history of the world and many more other
subjects
which assist students in attaining information about the world .
Therefore
, it is important to study every
field
for young children .
Furthermore
,
although
all the basic knowledge is essential for their growth , yet it can not be denied that offspring must give more importance to the
subject
which is more liked by them . As if they will focus on that
one
particular
subject
more than others ,
then
it can be helpful for them in future .
For example
, if any child is interested in art and craft activities ,
then
he must be encouraged to do more activities related to creativity so that he could go professionally through
this
field
by which he can get satisfaction as well as will be able to earn money through his interested
field
and can
further
develop his talent in future .
Thus
, giving influence to an interesting
subject
is
also
necessary . To conclude , I must say that after analysing the
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discussion it is clear that even though , the favourite
subject
must be given more importance than other
subjects
but , the attention of other
subjects
can not be denied .
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