A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

Nowadays, lots of countries consider tourism as a main source of income;

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problems if it is not managed in a correct way. In the modern

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trade would certainly contribute to the economy of the country and lead to an increase in the number of job opportunities, but there will

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be some drawbacks. One evident benefit is that tourism is inclined to result in economic growth.

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tend to spend large amounts of money on accommodation, transportation, food, and souvenirs.

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, a considerable number of the developing countries’ success is attributed to

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tourism. Another advantage worth noting is that job opportunities increase as more

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visit local areas. Obviously, increased demand from

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boosts local businesses and people who live in those areas benefit from employment opportunities in its turn.

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, there are obvious disadvantages to having the

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trade.

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of all, historical buildings can be damaged by large numbers of visitors. Apparently, the infrastructures of old buildings are not strong enough and can easily be damaged by

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while visiting these places. The

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factor to take into consideration is that most of the supplies in local regions are exhausted by visiting

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to say, visitors do not think about the problems they cause and consume terribly without considering inhabitants. To illustrate, one

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uses as much wood in a day as five local families in Khumbu. To sum up, while there are significant plus points

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as economic growth, there are

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some drawbacks to having the

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trade. I would

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recommend that people should reduce the detrimental effects and try to enhance the positives.