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what is globalization. Elicit the advantages and disadvantages of globalization

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Globalization
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 is the integration and interaction among people, governments and companies worldwide and
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 is possible due to the advancement of technology, communication and transportation. In
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 essay, we will discuss what are the positive and negative effects of
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globalization
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Globalization
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 means the exchange of trade, economy, culture, technology and knowledge globally.
Globalization
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 basically involves economical, cultural, and political
globalization
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. Economic
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 involves the exchange of goods, services, markets and technology among nations. In cultural
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, we share our culture, foods, religion, clothes. In political
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 government officials from different countries come together on a global platform to discuss
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 related issues.
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, the United nation is
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 an organization, where more than 200
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's official work together to solve worldwide issues. There are several benefits of
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 worldwide interaction.
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, it is useful for the economical development of the
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 and the
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, now most of the countries are encouraging to do business across borders, along with that they are
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 exchanging goods, services and labours.
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, many people travel to different places due to the availability of airlines and exchange their thoughts, culture and knowledge which is beneficial for
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 cultural development.
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, there are a few disadvantages.
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, if A
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 depends on B
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 for their resources, and if in a difficult situation B
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 decline to provide resources to A
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then
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 leads to a huge crisis in A
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 and that's why
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 interdependency is sometimes harmful
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