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what is globalization. Elicit the advantages and disadvantages of globalization

#globalization
Globalization
 is the integration and interaction among people, governments and companies worldwide and
this
 is possible due to the advancement of technology, communication and transportation. In
this
 essay, we will discuss what are the positive and negative effects of
this
globalization
.
Globalization
 means the exchange of trade, economy, culture, technology and knowledge globally.
Globalization
 basically involves economical, cultural, and political
globalization
. Economic
globalization
 involves the exchange of goods, services, markets and technology among nations. In cultural
globalization
, we share our culture, foods, religion, clothes. In political
globalization
 government officials from different countries come together on a global platform to discuss
world
 related issues.
For example
, the United nation is
such
 an organization, where more than 200
country
's official work together to solve worldwide issues. There are several benefits of
this
 worldwide interaction.
First
, it is useful for the economical development of the
country
 and the
world
.
For example
, now most of the countries are encouraging to do business across borders, along with that they are
also
 exchanging goods, services and labours.
Second
, many people travel to different places due to the availability of airlines and exchange their thoughts, culture and knowledge which is beneficial for
world
 cultural development.
On the other hand
, there are a few disadvantages.
For instance
, if A
country
 depends on B
country
 for their resources, and if in a difficult situation B
country
 decline to provide resources to A
country
then
this
 leads to a huge crisis in A
country
 and that's why
this
 interdependency is sometimes harmful
for
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to
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 the
world
.
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