Many
people
think that the
government
have been
support
for
artists
, which
people
believe
this
money
should be spent at somewhere more important. While some
artists
hasChange the verb form
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developed lots of
artworks
to attract tourists to
the economic revenue.
However
, some
artworks
are too expensive,
people
think
instead
of wasting all the
money
forChange preposition
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artworks
, is it better to use that fund in the hospital and age care.
In
this
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I will argue that the
government
haveAdd the particle
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giveWrong verb form
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support
to
artists
, meanwhile,
othersCorrect quantifier usage
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people
think it is wasting
money
on
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. If they could save some
money
forChange preposition
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support
the hospital and
that will be much better.
Artists
have developed
lotChange the article
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of
artworks
in many different places, painting wall is very popular in the cities, we
also
can see other different
artworks
build in the park, on the side of the street and at some famous places. These art
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have been
successReplace the word
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to attracted
the Correct article usage
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traveller from anywhere, which
like to visit some places with
lotCorrect article usage
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nice
viewFix the agreement mistake
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for photographs.
As a result
,
people
come to a
not just for the nice view or
artworks
, they will spend
money
inChange preposition
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,
accommadationsCorrect your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
and shopping as well.
Therefore
,
thisCorrect determiner usage
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cities or
areaFix the agreement mistake
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will become famous and the
economicReplace the word
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will increase
, so that, the
government
can get more income tax to cover the
artistsChange to a genitive case
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funds
.
Although
,
artworks
can help the
economicReplace the word
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howeverAdd the comma(s)
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, some
people
believe it is over provided
theAdd the preposition
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, as
hospitalFix the agreement mistake
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and
agecare
are needChange the verb form
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more
funds
, while now is the pandemic time. In today covid-19 virus has been spread
to Change preposition
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everywhere, in many
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they are short of
and Covid-19 test kit,
also
needs more antibacterial
to make sure all the elderly are living in the
saveReplace the word
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.
Therefore
, some residents believe the
should put more
funds
forChange preposition
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these 2 departmentChange the determiner
this 2 department
these 2 departments
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instead
of wasting the
money
on arts.
the
haveChange the verb form
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been spent
lotChange the article
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of
money
to
support
artists
,
artworks
can increase the
economicReplace the word
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,
which Correct pronoun usage
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both businesses and
government
can get
the Correct article usage
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benefitsWrong verb form
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onChange preposition
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it.
, hospital and
areCorrect your spelling
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both needs to
be considerChange the verb form
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too, as it
and
agecare
are about
people
live. In my
I think the
government
should put more
funds
for
and
in the future,
will help the country for
keepingWrong verb form
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in the
stable but is less important than
people
live.