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As global trade increase many goods including those we use on daily basis are produced in other countries and have to transported long distance. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

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The export and import of goods
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 increased continuously from the past years. The homemade things of a particular nation
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 sent by countries to the other part of the globe.
However
, even though
this
 practice brings about a mixed bag of both and bane, advantages outshine the disadvantages of
this
 trend. On the constructive part, society is blessed with numerous benefits because of the presence of global trade which
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 worth mentioning.
To begin
 with, it enhances the income of a nation.
For example
, India has exported many things around the world and other countries pay for it which provide income sources to a nation to make
further
 developments.
Moreover
, it makes brotherhood in between the globe. To illustrate, a survey has proven that due to trade, the relations among nations has been improved and a sign of peace is continued on the earth planet.
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