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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. What is your view of examinations?

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Examinations are the formal
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 of testing one's ability. While most
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 think paper-based exams are more convenient than
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computer-based exam, I think each
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 has its flaws. I agree with the view that written test is not the best
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 to access
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education. On the one hand, old
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 think "pen and paper" exams are the best
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 in the education environment.
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method
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 has been using more than decades and it is the easiest
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. We are using
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method
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 not only in the village where we could not access
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technology but
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 in schools, colleges and universities in cities.
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, knowledge is not defined by the methods we are using. It is only defined by our ability to solve
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problems.
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, because of the pandemic, computer-based exams or teaching methods are growing than face-to-face.
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people
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 need technical skills, it is easy and quick to access. In order to use computer expenses like electricity or meter bills or internet bills are becoming expensive.
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, in the technical improving eras, modern children are familiar with
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electronic devices. As mentioned above, examination accomplishment is not measuring the test system but it has flows too. In summary, whether we both use the old
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 or the new system, both systems have flaws and achievement is not based on the systems. It is only based on our skills and ability to solve problems.
People
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 choose the learning
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 or examination according to their preferences and perspective on the systems.
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