The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some
people
think, using
internet
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can cause
such
problems
with their life. While others believe that
this
kind of technology gives
more
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opportunity
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to them.
However
,
internet
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penetrated
to
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our daily life too deeply, and it makes some
problems
, which should be solved. The
first
problem is spending a lot of time
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using
web
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websites
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sites
.
People
don't notice
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time on their
phone
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especially during listing the social webs. And it is distributed all over the world, particularly among
young
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generation. Using
this
kind of
sites
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gives nothing useful for
person
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a person
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. And it
degrates
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degrades
denigrates
their mind
also
physical and mental skills, especially with growing children. And my suggestion to solve
this
problem is very simple. In my
opinion
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each
person
should control himself and
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time on it.
Also
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parents should limit their children when they
allowed
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to the
web
and pursue them.
Additionally
, in my experience, I just deleted
this social applications
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from my phone, and it really helps me). The
second
problem is total dependence on the
internet
. Nowadays,
people
can not imagine their life without
internet
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,
for
example
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all our money is on the cards, no one
use
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cash. And
also
there are
to
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many works which can not be performed if there is
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not
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internet
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. And add or
this
a
person
who
use
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web
sites
should give personal
informations
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pieces of information
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which can be hacked by
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an other
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person
and used against, to stole money or important data. And I suggest as a solution of
this
issue to comply with it. It means that
people
should find or get
way
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a way
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to detect suspicious
web
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websites
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sites
and avoid
it
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them
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. Because it is impossible to stop using
internet
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.
That is
why there should be special courses and subjects of study at school to prepare how to use websites properly
also
internet
illiteracy. In conclusion, despite
internet
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has
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brought some
problems
, it is
outstanding
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the outstanding
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thing which was created by
human
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. And I believe that
problems
which came with are very tiny compared to whole
this
technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread use
  • main problems
  • associated with
  • cybercrime
  • hacking
  • privacy
  • data security
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • online scams
  • fraud
  • loss of productivity
  • impersonal communication
  • social isolation
  • digital divide
  • solutions
  • suggest
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