The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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such
problems
with their life. While others believe that this
kind of technology gives more
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opportunities
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, internet
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the internet
to
our daily life too deeply, and it makes some Change preposition
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problems
, which should be solved.
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problem is spending a lot of time by
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web
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websites
sites
. People
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phone
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young
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. And it Add an article
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degrades
denigrates
also
physical and mental skills, especially with growing children. And my suggestion to solve this
problem is very simple. In my opinion
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person
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parents should limit their children when they Add a comma
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web
and pursue them. Additionally
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second
problem is total dependence on the internet
. Nowadays, people
can not imagine their life without internet
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cash. And Change the verb form
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no
not
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internet
.
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a person
who use
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uses
web
sites
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which can be hacked by Change the wording
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pieces of information
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an other
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another
person
and used against, to stole money or important data. And I suggest as a solution of this
issue to comply with it. It means that people
should find or get way
to detect suspicious Correct article usage
a way
web
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websites
sites
and avoid it
. Because it is impossible to stop using Correct pronoun usage
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internet
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That is
why there should be special courses and subjects of study at school to prepare how to use websites properly also
internet
illiteracy.
In conclusion, despite internet
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has
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problems
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human
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problems
which came with are very tiny compared to whole this
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