You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities • explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Sid, My name is Ankush Tiwari. I attended your concert
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evening and it was great. I am writing to you to appreciate your performance and to request you to help me with my musical training.
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, your performance at the concert was amazing. Especially, the fusion of classic and western
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was a treat to me. I couldn’t help but dance to your awesome tunes. I thoroughly enjoyed the concert. I am very much interested in learning
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and aim to become a good musician like you. I have learned the basics.
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, I have performed on various occasions and received appreciation from the audience. I am yet to learn many advanced forms
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as trance and rock
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. I kindly request you to assist me by providing some suggestions on learning these new age
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compositions. Specifically, I would like to know how to switch from one to another without much hassle and to go in-depth while performing any type of
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.
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would help me a lot to grow in
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field. I hope you would be happy to support me. I look forward to hearing from you. Warm regards, Ankush
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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