You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities • explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Sid, My name is Ankush Tiwari. I attended your concert

last

evening and it was great. I am writing to you to appreciate your performance and to request you to help me with my musical training.

To begin

, your performance at the concert was amazing. Especially, the fusion of classic and western

music

was a treat to me. I couldn’t help but dance to your awesome tunes. I thoroughly enjoyed the concert. I am very much interested in learning

music

and aim to become a good musician like you. I have learned the basics.

Also

, I have performed on various occasions and received appreciation from the audience. I am yet to learn many advanced forms

such

as trance and rock

music

. I kindly request you to assist me by providing some suggestions on learning these new age

music

compositions. Specifically, I would like to know how to switch from one to another without much hassle and to go in-depth while performing any type of

music

This

would help me a lot to grow in

this

field. I hope you would be happy to support me. I look forward to hearing from you. Warm regards, Ankush

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

196 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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captivating
musical prowess
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