Some people think that the government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the internet to help them find jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? Give reasons for your answer and include any relative examples form your own knowledge and experience.
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who haven’t
find
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found
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. Some Use synonyms
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government
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phone
so that those unemployed students can use Fix the agreement mistake
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jobs
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a phone
phone
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disagree
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government
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job
person.
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phone
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a phone
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job
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the biggest question that why they can’t find the Add a comma
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job
is that they do not have a special skill or enough ability for them to be employed. (The skills they have are not needed or out of date.) The Use synonyms
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government
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skill
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others license
(training courses).
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other licenses
Furthermore
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benefit
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benefits
people
or not. Use synonyms
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Government
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government
will give every unemployed Add an article
the government
people
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phone
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let some Correct pronoun usage
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job
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phone
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phone
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jobs
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. For a good solution, Use synonyms
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government
should open a class (give a free and better-quality training) for unemployed students to learn more Add an article
the government
skill
or have some other new skills for them to have Fix the agreement mistake
skills
a higher opportunities
(more efficient a helping the unemployed ) to find a Correct the article-noun agreement
a higher opportunity
higher opportunities
job
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