Now a daysCorrect the word
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, due to the
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in recession there are lots of graduate students
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their
jobs
. Some
people
hold that
government
must provide
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mobileAdd an article
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phoneFix the agreement mistake
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so that those unemployed students can use
internetAdd an article
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to find
jobs
, while others stand that there is
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necessary to provide
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phoneFix the agreement mistake
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to every unemployed
people
.
This
essay totally
disagreeChange the verb form
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that
government
should give mobile
phone
to no
job
person.
Firstly
, the reason why
government
needn’t provide
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is that
this
is not a solution for them to find their
jobs
. Having
phoneCorrect article usage
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(to access the internet) is one of the factors that can help them to find
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job
, while it is not the biggest factor why they can’t find
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job
. In my
the biggest question that why they can’t find the
job
is that they do not have a special skill or enough ability for them to be employed. (The skills they have are not needed or out of date.) The
first
thing
government
must open a class (training programmers) for them to learn
such
as computer
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or some
others licenseFix the agreement mistake
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(training courses).
Furthermore
, the way of using the internet and mobile phones is uncontrollable. We don’t know whether mobile phones will bring
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for jobless
people
or not.
In addition
, it might have a possibility that some
people
want to have a mobile
phone
and refuse to find
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job
.
Due to Change preposition
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governmentAdd an article
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will give every unemployed
people
(jobless
people
) a
phone
,
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let some
people
think that if they don’t have a
job
, they will have a free mobile
phone
.
As a result
, the motivation of finding a
job
will decline.
In conclusion,
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unemployed
people
with a free mobile
phone
is not a good way for
people
to find
jobs
. In
it will be a factor that
people
dislike finding a
job
. For a good solution,
governmentAdd an article
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should open a class (give a free and better-quality training) for unemployed students to learn more
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or have some other new skills for them to have
a higher opportunitiesCorrect the article-noun agreement
a higher opportunity
higher opportunities
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(more efficient a helping the unemployed ) to find a
job
.