In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the manufacturing technology industry becomes more and more modern.
As a result
of
this
change,
unmmanned
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unmanned
vehicles
is predicted to be popular in the near future. Some
people
agree that passengers travelling inside
these
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robot
would bring a lot of
benefits
.
However
, in my point of
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, I firmly believe that there will be seen more drawbacks compared with
benefits
. On the one hand, all development
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its own advantages and
also
for the above change. Unmanned
vehicles
for
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human
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only may help
people
to find and travel easily. They may not have to search for a long time or catch some problems with the drivers.
Moreover
, if
people
do not need to drive, they will have more free time to do others. In my opinion,
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am not really ready to try
this
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vehicles
.
On the other hand
,
although
this
trend will bring some
benefits
, the drawbacks seem to surpass it.
Firstly
, unmanned
vehicles
will be never more safe and intelligent than one need
people
. It is obvious that
robot
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can have
reaction
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as quickly as
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humans
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when driving. Especially if there are
a
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big problems,
people
may easily face danger or
accident
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accidents
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.
These
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robot
will be used
for
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only
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by human
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human
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, so it is pretty difficult to try on others. For more, the
second
drawback is that
this
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changes may make a fundamental job
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disappear in the future. All of us know that driving is one of the most popular
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now.
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, if
robot
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robots
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alter
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this
field, a lot of
people
will become
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. As a fact of
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, there will be a huge burden on drivers and
also
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.
Life
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of many
family
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will change to a terrible context.
Moreover
, if
unmmaned
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unmanned
vehicles
will practically be applied,
human
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may lose their ability and rely more on technology. The world is likely dominated by smart
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robots
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and
people
become
more lazy
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. In conclusion,
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some
benefits
, there still be many drawbacks as unsafety or job burden that
people
should
considerate
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about unmanned
vehicles
. All changes start with
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reason
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but so as to be real,
human
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humans
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need to fix and realise all problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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